Super Powers!!

WALT: Write Effective Paragraphs with juicy and and exciting words.

If I had my own superpower, it would be HOT LASER EYES! There are so many reasons why I like laser eyes. Why I like laser eyes are because when I need to cook something I can just look at it and it’s already made for me. Continue reading if YOU like my POWER.Marked by: Lani

Laser eyes look like an red, blood lookin, straight line laser beam coming out of your own two eyes. Your must be wondering does it really hurt your eyes, when you really do it. It’s kinda a normal feeling it just only feels like an animal eating you head but also a awkward feeling. I warn you to only do it in an emergency because something really serious might happen, but it is really up to you if you had my incredible astonishing power.

If I had to use my power on something good, it would be for a little cute kitten  stuck on the tree, and I could just chop the tree and safely bring the cat back down. You never know I might use for something bad, like if someone is mean and bullying me and I could just zap them in the butt to teach them lesson, but then there are some cooking that needs to be done so I could just look at the frozen pork and then it is all cooked up. My mother would be so impressed with her incredible, smart, legit, awesome, amazing and cool daughter.  

I like having this legit power because, ever since I was little I thought that I could steam objects with just looking at it. Sometimes I wish that I really did have laser eyes because I can craft, steam or cook anything within just in a few minutes, I really wonder what if I really did have laser eyes it would be amazing but would I know how to control it. I think that laser eyes are a cool, awesome and an amazing power to have.

Task: Today we learnt on how to write effective paragraphs and writing juicy and exciting, like: Spectacular, Legit, Power and many more. We did this in a class we had a few minutes to write on paragraph per minutes. After we paired up and focused on our particular learning need so we can work on getting better and better on learning how to write juicy words and exciting words.

What I learnt about this learning environment was I learnt how to find juicy words, how to use juicy words and make sense when using juicy words. I learnt how to focus on my learning needs to get better and better at writing amazing stories like this. Please leave a comment so I can focus on what I need to make my writing even better I do now.

Julie and her doll.

Once upon a time there lived a girl name Julie, she had a little doll name Mac the princess. Know one knew how to get that little doll, kids never ever got that doll only Julie, Julie got bullied that day because she was the odd one out with her doll club that she was in. The leader of the group was Anna-Bell who set the world record of the most dolls in the entire world. Julie looked up to Anna-Bell but stopped when she was 11 years old when she heard about Anna's story, when Anna-Bell was little she use to hate dolls when she saw one she went crazy and bites its heads off but when she got a little older she started to calm down and started to steal all the dolls she saw and haunted anyone with a doll she never had, that was the story. Julie had the doll that Anna-Bell didn't have, when Anna-Bell heard that Julie had the doll that she didn't, Anna-Bell tracked her down until she got that doll in her hands. Julie was in deep deep trouble.

The last day of school THE STORY.

The last day of Mansion bay school. Three lovely girls name Bella, Chrissa and Lizzy decided they should go to the beach after school. When Bella was looking at the time it was nearly 3:00, Bella passed a note to Chrissa saying " It is nearly 3:00 pass it on to Lizzy". Bella, Chrissa and Lizzy stared at the time when the bell rang which gave them a big shock, Bella and Lizzy ran outside but they couldn't find Chrissa. Bella said " Can you see her" "Nope I can't" Lizzy replied, both of them were scared at first because the bay was cleared out really fast, DOINK Bella souted "WHAT THE MARBLES WAS THAT"  "it was this brick it as a note on it I" "What does it say" "It says if you want your friend back come and get her, here's a hint A fun activity to do with your friend. "What would that be" Bella whispered "I don't know" Lizzy whispered back.

Angelina and Rosie

As I was walking down to the shops, I saw my friend I said my greetings and went inside the shop when Angelina Hathaway, the most meanest and terrible person on the world. Angelina's two is  assistant Danielle and Lucy, they do what she says. oh yea silly me, My name is Rosie I live down the road from the shops. As I was saying I ran out with a burst, I don't make eye contact with her if I do hope me good luck.

Angelina use to be my friend use to, but as we got older we started to drift apart I got more friends and she got more jealous. I wish everything went back to normal every time I go up against she has spit balls to spit on me, I hate it, sometimes I wonder why does she have to be mean to me. 

The ice cream truck problem.

On ordinary day 2 little girls name Elizabeth and Amber were walking down the road when, They saw the Ice cream truck. Amber and Elizabeth had a race to the ice cream but when they got there they had no money they were sad. So they walked all the way home with a frown on there faces. When the week pass the ice cream truck came to there front of there Elizabeth house, Amber and Elizabeth rushed in and grabbed there money and ran to the truck but when they got back the truck wasn't there any more. "That was weird it was only here for 1 minute" Amber shouted "I know" Elizabeth said in a suspicious way. 

When the ice cream truck came back again Elizabeth took the money out of her pocket and, but the ice cream man drove off. "JERK" Elizabeth shouted, "Why are you saying jerk for" Amber whispered There is something wrong with that ice cream truck. Elizabeth and Amber caught up to the ice cream and followed it, When the ice cream stopped at in ordinary place. The ice cream truck drove right threw the wall like it was magic, Elizabeth walked up to it and kicked the wall. When Amber and Elizabeth fall into the hole beneath. TO BE CONTINUED

Witches Part 4.

"AHHHH" Emma screamed "What"Andi replied " I am really scared of frogs" "Oh I was practicing my spells", "Yea just get them out please" "okay". Emma slept over Andi house they were searching about the book of spells, they stayed up all night searching websites but nothing was happening. Andi was trying everything she had but nothing, Andi was depressed but she was okay she had Emma support.

The next day Andi and Emma walk to the shops. When Abby came by she is always suspicious about everything. Andi and Emma walked right passed her but Abby said "Hi, Umm what are you doing" "Why do you ask" Andi replied "Because I never see you in at the shops before" "Well she goes to the shops now" Emma replied. "Bye Abby see you at school" Said the both of them. When Andi got home she said "I will never ever go to the shops ever again" "Why" "Abby is always there shes like a hawk spying on you". To be contiued.

Witches, Part 2.

Andi returned to school the second day she knew that she was a witch. Andi was scared, she didn't know what to do, After school Andi went home with Emma. Andi tolded Emma everything what happened the day that Andi froze her, she said her apologize to her. Andi was walking home with Emma to home, Andi and Emma went up to Andi room. That's when Andi found a book, the book of the witches spells. Andi couldn't believe it  she had all the spells to cast a spell. When Andi told Emma when she came up Emma couldn't believe it. Andi's dad came up and said " What all the noise" "Nothing dad" replied Andi. Emma whispered "That was close" "I know" Andi whispered back. 

To be continued.

My Samoa Narritive

Quinlan woke up with a big “YAWN”. “KNOCK KNOCK” Quinlan opened the door and it was her bestie Amber, Amber said “Do you want to go to samoa with me”  “Yes I will love to go to samoa with you” Quinlan replied. Amber and Quinlan started packing for their trip to samoa.  They were heading to the airport and waiting for their plane  for a few minutes.

When they arrived at samoa, Quinlan wanted to go in a bus but Amber didn’t, Amber said “If there is no seats left for me to sit on I have to sit on someone that I don’t know” “Who cares just come” Quinlan replied. Quinlan and Amber were waiting for the bus to come. Quinlan was wondering where was the timetable but Amber said “There is no timetable in Samoa, So you don’t even know when the bus is coming”. Amber and Quinlan where waiting for hours, Until the bus came it been 1 hour and 30 minutes. They hopped on the bus and took a sit. When they were heading to the city, a car took over them and made them flip of the cliff. Everyone was in danger and did not know what to do.

Quinlan was terrified even Amber was. When Quinlan was looking for supplies in her bag Amber was freaking out, Amber never ever got stuck in a bus before Quinlan said “Sit down and calm down we are going to be fine” “okay” Amber replied. Finally Quinlan found a pocket knife and cut the plastic windows, but the only thing happened that most of them couldn’t climb a cliff. They were there for almost a day, until a man found them. The man who found them had a rope and is was big like a giant. He threw the rope down and pulled a person up one by one it did take long but thankful for that man. We thank the man for the help and carried on walking to the city for lunch and dinner. They had to walk back to  the motel because they were scared they might of get stuck again.

My Super Hero.

Amazing man is a cool guy who lives in GI. He loves his family and they love him. His Niece Rosie told him “you are my hero”. Pati loved hearing that even though he’s an Amazing hero he has time to hang out with his family.

That day he was working at his desk trying to think about the perfect story. All of a sudden it popped up in his head, family, I should write about family.

When he was writing his story he felt a little cold. He turned around and saw Mac Evilness. He ran to the toilet and quickly changed into his uniform. He flew out and punched him. Out of nowhere Captin Under Pants came and helped him take him down. The Captain whacked him and left it to Amazingman to finish off Mac Evilness. Mac Evilness got back up and tried to kick Amazingman but Amazing dodged his useless kick and chucked him where he belonged with his Amazing strength.

Everyone was happy and relieved he was gone.

Amazing man went back and helped people getting back where they belong. His niece was happy when he saw him back home. THE END.

My MOTHER and FATHER

My mum is fun and always happy that what I like about her. My mother is 44 and works at Glen taylor school since I started at pt England school she has been a hero to me and makes me safe inside one more thing, I LOVE MY MUM!!!. (my mum is Niuean)

My dad is strong and is always happy that what I like about him. My Father is 44 and works at owens ever since I was born he always kept me safe, He Takes me to my brothers games and my sisters games. He always watches my netball games and rippa games if he doesn't have work thats why I love my dad and he loves me to.

As you can read this it tell you a little bit about my Mum and Dad and why I love them.