WALT: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.
A recount tells your reader what happened from your point of view.
A good recount is easy to read and tells the reader what it was like to be there.
Vocab to help my recount:
Animals
San Diego Zoo
Tour
Impressive
Fascinating
Environment
Experience
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Purpose:
What message do I want my reader to have? (highlight)
San Deigo Zoo has lot’s of awesome animals. - Bungy Jumpers
A virtual tour of a zoo is such a cool experience. - Hokey Pokeys
I learnt a lot about animals from this website. - Paua Shells
Virtual tours of a zoo isn’t as fun as a real zoo. - Whitebait fritters
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Plan of my paragraph topics
1. Introduction
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Orientates and hooks
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2. Body Paragraph 1
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Teacher gave us instructions- Virtual tour of San Diego website, What was on it, what did you do, List animals on the website and etc.
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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What was the animal I learnt, what does it do, what does it eat, how does it adapt. #1 animal
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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What was the animal I learnt, what does it do, what does it eat, how does it adapt. #2 animal
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5. Conclusion
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What I thought about the san diego zoo
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Animals at the zoo are fun. On San Diego Zoo website, we learnt heaps about animals and their species. Have you ever explored on a website, with animals and their experience?
