Monday, 3 August 2015

Bean bags for hire 3pt whole day!!

WALT: Pursued the reader to agree with our message

Bean bags are super soft  and comfortable for YOUR bum to sit on. Feeling super tired from playing you can hire the bean bag and feeling divine when doing your work, you will be the coolest kid around (maybe).


Any time in class the bean bags are available for hire any time. Instead of sitting on the hard cold dirty floor or on a brown boring ugly chair, you will be able to sit on a bean bag for 3pt making your bottom placid and comfortable.


The bean bags are filled with soft small beans and covered in a smooth soft rubber skin. They can be sculpted into the shape of your choice. You can do almost anything with the bean bag like sitting on the bean bag or leaning on it against the wall.



The bean bags come in two different bright colours. An ocean blue bean bag, and an grassy green looking bean bag. It’s absolutely your choice of which one to sit on. There both prodigious to sit on.


You pay once at any time and get it for the rest of the day it is really truly stunning to sit on, it’s like you're in a another universe with stars around you. The cost is 3pt, ( Whoa pricey much).

Remember for 3pt you can sit on a beanbag during class all day, that's right I just said all day just for 3pt. So save up to hire a bean bag, so I think to buy this bean bag. It will be a YAY for your bottom.
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This task was to re-craft of what our teacher wrote. We had to write this to pursue a reader and make YOU interested in our learning  .We had to put in juicy words to make out reader interested, so what I did to do that was use thesaurus this helps me find more juicy words for my writing and also better words like amazing. You should try thesaurus and maybe you will be prolific and maybe even better than me.

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