One Million Dollars!!

WALT: Write effective paragraphs using juicy and exciting words

If I had a million dollars at the mall I could even buy the whole mall. I could get anything I want at toyworld, JB Hifi or rebel sports. It would super duper fun. The first mind when it comes to one million dollars are food I wouldn’t buy it that much BUT butter chicken it my first thing I would go to. If I had one million dollars I could have shower and chill with my own money.

f I brought something really cool from toy world it would be, a nerf gun, targets, balls and small stuff toy. I would love to have these toys are because I like to shoot stuff like the targets and the nerf gun I can

practise my shooting and master my brother at it. The balls and the gun I could have a army attack with my brother it would be super fun and the stuff toys are cute to play with my fat cute puppy ( Krptyo ).

If I would spend my money on JB Hifi, it would be a Iphone, laptop, tv and speakers, my house would be filled with electronic’s. My Iphone would be updated and be like as big as my hand, my laptop would have thousands of megabytes. My tv and speaker could go in my room, I would play loud as music and some nice soothing music so I can fall asleep. My house would be super filled with electronic’s I don’t think my mum would happy with that.

If I spent my money on rebel sport I could buy me leauge shorts, netball gear, rugby gear and the Warriors t-shirt maybe even the All-Black shirt and the QLD shirt. I could buy nice things for me to wear for my netball game and rugby games. I could even buy me practice gear so I can get better and better of what I am now. With this money at this store I could be good as Maria tutaia and Cathrine Latu, maybe even better.

Although there are some more important things than buying stuff for only me, buying cool things is fun only when it’s for someone special in my life. If I could be responsible with this money, I would pay it for elderly people in hospital who are in badly diseased. I would spend it on more comfortable beds. Some elderly people can’t afford medication so I could help them with that aswell, I would be a hero to them and the doctors.

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Today we wrote a recount about what we would do if we had a one million dollars. So in this writing we had to selfish in the first 4 paragraphs and we didn't even have second thoughts on be financially responsible, but on the last paragraphs we did have to think of what we had to buy to be responsible. We did this in a class thing so it was quiet for a while but at the same time it gave us time to think of what we are going to write.