Monday, 14 July 2014

MY STORY.

Once upon a time there was a little girl name Tyler she was wondering what she could post. This afternoon she was thinking hard for an idea but nothing came to her mind she thought night and day but nothing at all she could think of. That night she was having her little nap when Tyler heard something, Tyler went down the stairs but nothing was there she thought it was just her. When she woke up she saw her favorite art work was on the floor, "someone was here last night she looked up and the window was open she said "So that's why I heard a noise and yeah" silly her so Tyler went back to what she was doing and finishing her fantastic story she finally found out what she is going to write.
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4 comments:

  1. Mr Webb and Room One, Taranaki14 July 2014 at 22:16

    Rosalina
    This is a great piece of creative writing and I really enjoyed reading it. Nice to see that you are posting in the holidays in your own time. My favourite part of the story was when you wrote about the end of the story and seeing the Art on the floor that explained what was happening.
    Mr Webb and Room One, Auroa Primary School, Taranaki,
    mrwebbauroa.blogspot.com

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    1. Rosalina17 July 2014 at 10:28

      Thank you so much that is really a pleasure to read your comment. I hope you are having a great time with your family and ready to start term three.

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  2. Dorothy15 July 2014 at 00:42

    Hi Rosalina - what a great imagination you have! I am enjoying reading your blog posts in the holidays.

    Mrs Burt
    London

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    1. Rosalina17 July 2014 at 10:37

      Thank you Mrs Burt I hope you are having a great time in London with Mr Burt. I can't wait to hear your wonderful stories in London.

      Rosalina
      Auckland

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