Thursday, 19 June 2014

Hot day and My feet is burning.

     MY FEET ARE BURNING.

It was a sunny hot day. My feet were burning hot. It felt like I was on the sun. I was jumping up and down screaming so loud that everyone heard me in the neighbourhood. I ran to the the bath and cooled my feet down "ahhhhhhhhh".

2 comments:

  1. Excellent descriptive paragraph Rosalina.

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  2. Hi rose I really like that ahhhhhhhh' at the bottom it was funny.

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