Showing posts with label the river talks. Show all posts
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Tuesday, 3 March 2015

The rive talks (Omaru creek).

W.A.L.T. To write detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Want to know how to help our creek? In the old days Omaru creek was once beautiful. People may think I am lying but I’m NOT, the creek was beautiful but if you want to swim LOOK AFTER OUR LOCAL CREEK.
  


Our task today was to write a detailed introduction with a simple sentenace, complex and another simple sentence.